Space Command evaluation
GLIESE: SPACE FORCE - Scouting
8 INT.RESIDENCE. DAY
MEDIUM WIDE: SILHOUETTE SHOT WITH BED IN FRONT OF WINDOW
It is early morning. LISA sits up in bed.
It felt much more comforting to
know he could hop on a train and
come over, instead of the finality
presented by the distance of outer
9 INT. SPACE COMMAND BASE. DAY
MEDIUM CLOSE UP: CAMERA CREATES UNCOMFORTABLE CLOSENESS
JOHN gets out of bed and we see a quick succession of multiple close up shots showing him put on his uniform.
Regardless of the situation's paradox
reality, since we couldn't spend any time
together once he received his uniform
10 EXT. SPACE ELEVATOR. DAY
WIDE: SPACE ELEVATOR DOORS FRAMED STATICALLY
JOHN enters the elevator. His back is facing the camera.
(Soft piano melody stops playing in background)
MEDIUM: FROM INSIDE THE ELEVATOR OVER THE SHOULDER
Through the elevator's large glass portions JOHN sees LISA run up. She is merely a few seconds too late. The elevator doors are closing. She puts her hand on the glass and frantically screams.
There is a short pause where both stare at each other deep into the eyes.
CLOSE UPS CUT BACK AND FORTH OF THEIR DESPERATE FACES