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The results say:

Space Command evaluation

GLIESE: SPACE FORCE - Scouting

8 INT.RESIDENCE. DAY

MEDIUM WIDE: SILHOUETTE SHOT WITH BED IN FRONT OF WINDOW

It is early morning. LISA sits up in bed.

LISA (VOICEOVER)

It felt much more comforting to 

know he could hop on a train and 

come over, instead of the finality 

presented by the distance of outer 

space.

9 INT. SPACE COMMAND BASE. DAY

MEDIUM CLOSE UP: CAMERA CREATES UNCOMFORTABLE CLOSENESS

JOHN gets out of bed and we see a quick succession of multiple close up shots showing him put on his uniform.

LISA (VOICEOVER)

Regardless of the situation's paradox 

reality, since we couldn't spend any time 

together once he received his uniform 

anyway.

10 EXT. SPACE ELEVATOR. DAY

WIDE: SPACE ELEVATOR DOORS FRAMED STATICALLY

JOHN enters the elevator. His back is facing the camera.

(Soft piano melody stops playing in background)

MEDIUM: FROM INSIDE THE ELEVATOR OVER THE SHOULDER

Through the elevator's large glass portions JOHN sees LISA run up. She is merely a few seconds too late. The elevator doors are closing. She puts her hand on the glass and frantically screams.

LISA

John!! John!!!

There is a short pause where both stare at each other deep into the eyes.

CLOSE UPS CUT BACK AND FORTH OF THEIR DESPERATE FACES